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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 34, and I live in Texas... I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for seven years. I'm finally ready to have my work published. I think it's about time that people read my stuff on a mass scale. So I'm looking for publishers or ways... to publish my own books. I am not rich by any means; but I pray that a way shall indeed surface... for my voice to be heard. Hobbies I love music, movies, reading, writting, painting & stargazing (whenever i'm out in the country).
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Fruitful
Fruitful



dancing on the vine,



and rejoicing herein

beaming summer rays...



surely this be, but one,



of the coming down

shinning glory days



3-13-08

 
Francis Meyrick

This is a good word picture, where you have taken in the title just one word, and expanded nicely on it. This poem has warmth, and hope and sparkle.
Good job.Smile


Fruitful

dancing on the vine, (nice)

and rejoicing herein

beaming summer rays... (nice)



surely this be, but one, ("surely this MUST be..."??)



of the coming down (coming down...as in "approaching", "on the way"...)

shinning glory days (typo: "shining")


Laughing


We little humans, hurtling through the Universe on our tiny, pale blue dot, will find few answers to Life's great mysteries. But we should at least find many of the questions. To write is to ask. To seek. To grope. With humility, and humor. Peace.
Posted on Friday, March 14, 2008 at 17:16:41

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