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I live in Canada in a western part of this vast country where the winter lasts for more then six months! I love the country and its people. My country has wonderful lakes and the Rocky Mountains with famous Ice fields. Ice, that lasts for more then four hundred years. There are still wild life like Moose and Bears - And hunting and fishing is common... Ice hockey and ice dancing competitions are the most popular sports in Canada as well as the Calgary Stampede…Now more about me…My hobbies include writing, exercising, talking to friends, listening to my favourite singers Elvis Presley, Sarah Brightman, Enya, some old songs from 70 & 80 and all other kinds of music, and watching TV on occasion. I believe that writing poems is a very good way to express your own individual beliefs, feelings, and thoughts & I always like to make sure that what I write comes from the heart and not merely the mind. I have a wide range of thoughts and feelings to express in my poetry. The inspiration for the poems that I write comes from sources as diverse as listening to my favourite Gospel songs and music. I also like to be able to write poems that people can connect with and relate. I have had poems published in anthologies from the Noble House publishing as well as International Library of Poetry and received and an award for my writes. In the future I want to publish my own book with my own poems and short stories. I am charismatic, optimistic, romantic, passionate, loving, and caring. Enjoy life immensely. I am interested in surfing the Internet, healthy living, Yoga & Meditation, reading, watching movies and videos, writing short stories, poetry, tennis, traveling to warmer locations. Love Photography - Especially the Rocky Mountains...Watching sunsets & sunrises. Take great interest in Architecture, Archaeology, and Fine Arts! I have a special love for foreign Cultures' - Enjoy romantic dinners for two on occasion... Spending time with my family and friends as well as meeting new people... Appreciate honesty, loyalty, and respectfulness of themselves and others... Music & Poetry has been my greatest passion...Peace, Love and Happiness to All.
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FAILED PROMISE


He said, "I love you",
Touching her palm gently
Eyes sparkled and shined
Like a Diamonds on the sky
In the shadow of a smiley full Moon
With it's round face like a balloon.

Passion, love, romance, candles
a glass of a red wine -
Great music for the evening
two people wrapped
in a blanket of love-
When being together,
The World did not matter at all.

She told him, "I love you",
you are the man of my dreams.
I have been waiting for you
At the Youth Fountain...
A secret meeting place, for those two.

He loved her dearly each day.
However, life events kept them apart.
She cried often to her pillow
missing the man
who was dearest to her heart.

Dreams, promises failed.
The hopes she had disappeared.
Life was empty with out him
her heart was broken and bled.

Her days were sad and gloomy
as a sky with heavy clouds
Darkness covered her soul,
Tears misted her eyes-
Only memory she treasured
forever lived in her broken heart.


© 2008 Zuzanna

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"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott, How to Live with Another Person, 1974

Last edited by Zuzanna on April 22, 2008, 6:52 pm
 
Alister Flik

This is a very up close and personal look into a broken heart. I feel like I've been let into the life and death of this relationship. The most potent lines, for me, are the last two. Very moving. Good work.

Alister


"I do not think, therefore I am a mustache."
-Sartre *Nausea*
Posted on Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 01:01:44

 
storylover

Well I do enjoy this audio addition!
Wonderful to read AND listen to the poet reading their own work!

Thank you for posting. This was great. My wife says to say how much she liked it.

Applaud


"The longest journey starts with but a single step"
(Old Chinese proverb)
Posted on Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 14:53:45

 
Zuzanna

Dear Alister

Thank you so much for your comment.
You are very intuitive poetess.

Smile Smile

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna


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"Beauty in things exists in the mind which contemplates them."
-David Hume (1711-1776)

Last edited by Zuzanna on April 23, 2008, 4:15 pm


Posted on Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 16:17:22

 
Zuzanna

Dear Storylover

I am glad that the recording was received in a positive way.
[ English is not my first language.]

Thank you both for the nice comment.Smile

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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"You are the people who are shaping a better world.
One of the secrets of inner peace is the practice of compassion."
-Dalai Lama (1935 -)


Posted on Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 16:34:51

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